Feedback, I could really use it.

I think I've finally gotten that hang of this whole blogging thing. This is my 18th post, shoot me a comment, tell me what you think of my blog. Give me some pointers on how to improve.

I think I play around with it and change it a little to much. I changed the name again. It used to be A Free Writer's Journal now it's N-Rambler. And I changed the template for the millionth time too. I guess that's the art freak in me.

I have a new music favorite, a band named Skillet and oldies rock like AC/DC and Aerosmith. So I think I'll post music videos on the slow days when I have nothing to say.

Like today.

But, instead of posting a music video, I'm going to post a small little ramble-like poem thing. Enjoy.

But first, here's another tip for writers everywhere. Watch the grammer, sometimes when you're writing fast you get the punctuation all tangled up. The bast way to avoid this problem is to read your peice out loud to see if it flows. Take long pauses on periods and short ones on commas.

And remember, the way you write it and the way you mean it to sound might not be the way your reader will read it. So make sure you write it that way.

Now for a little poem type thing that's the first post in a second blog I'm doing. It's just a place where I can go an write through things that I'm dealing with. It's just a where I can just write or post whatever I want. Feel free to check it out.

Peice of Peace

I'm sitting on a beach
Watching the waves roll off the shore

I'm standing in the rain
Feeling the droplets roll off my skin

I'm drifting in the water
Losing myself in the calm
Losing myself in the quiet

The world is calm
The world is quiet

I know that when I leave
it will all rush back
the sound will rush through

but when I'm here
It grows quiet
I float
the world grows clam

I'm happy just being here
in my little peice of peace